The main improvements

After some feedback from our target audience we were told that our film looks too much like a trailer and so to improve on this we added in some extra shots at the end after the titles. The titles were used to separate the main intro of the film which is fast paced and then after it introduced a much calmer environment. We did this because we wanted this introduction to be more like a typical film because not many films start with a fast paced intro and then keep on going fast paced immediately after. We wanted our intro to look like more of a proper film and by going by the general conventions of film i think we achieved this. We also were told that our film needed some extra titles so we also quickly added in titles throughout the intro. Also some of the chase shots were too long so we edited them down so it was much faster paced.